
Video Tours Unscripted: What I Say and Why It Works
Field Notes #4
Field Notes Series Part 2: The Loom Effect
What I Actually Say in Preview Tours (and How You Can Use This Even Without a Client)
This Isn’t a Script. It’s How I Think Out Loud in Preview Tours
In Part 1, I shared how Loom quietly decided I’m a Top 3% editor — not because I’m fancy, but because I consistently turn real-life showings into clear stories. (Read Part 1 - where I get techy with it)
Now let’s get practical.
This is not a script.
It’s a way of thinking out loud with purpose.
Below are a few real moments pulled from my preview tours, followed by how you can translate the intent behind them into your own videos — whether you have a client right now or not.
Story 1: Giving Clients Permission to Be Underwhelmed
What I actually say (paraphrased from the tour):
“I’m underwhelmed. If you love it, I want you to love it — it’s just not landing for me. I don’t know what you’d do with this layout.”
Why this works:
Most buyers are afraid to admit doubt — especially to their agent. When you say it first, you remove pressure. You normalize discernment.
How agents can use this:
Say the quiet part out loud
Name awkward layouts, odd flow, or compromises calmly
Let clients decide without feeling like they’re disappointing you
Reframe for your own videos:
“This one’s not bad — it’s just specific. You’d have to really love this layout for it to make sense.”
Story 2: Narrating Feel, Not Features
What I actually say:
“It smells good in here.”
“This feels cared for.”
“This one’s priced lower, but it’s nicer — it’s been taken care of.”
Why this works:
Photos don’t convey care, smell, sound, or energy. Video does. Clients make emotional decisions first, then justify them logically.
How agents can use this:
Talk about senses: smell, light, noise, warmth, dryness
Share instinct before specs
Trust your professional gut
Reframe for your own videos:
“This house just feels easier to live in.”
“You can tell someone loved this place.”
Story 3: Context Is the Show
What I actually do:
I record:
the drive in
nearby parks
traffic noise
where errands happen
how close it feels to real life
Why this works:
Out-of-town buyers (and even local ones) don’t just buy houses — they buy routines.
How agents can use this:
Narrate the approach, not just the door
Compare areas honestly
Use phrases like “city suburb” vs “country suburb”
Reframe for your own videos:
“This is close to everything, but you’ll still feel tucked away.”
“This area has activity — not chaos.”
The Translation: How You Can Do This
If You Have an Active Client
Use preview tours to reduce decision fatigue
Narrow 10 listings down to 3–4 strong contenders
Save time, energy, and emotional bandwidth
Build trust without extra meetings
If You Don’t Have a Client Yet (this part matters 👇)
Here’s the overlooked opportunity:
🎥 The “Ideal Client Tour” Strategy
Pick an ideal client avatar and pretend you’re already working for them.
For example:
First-time buyers relocating to your city
A downsizing couple
A growing family
An investor
A remote worker moving from out of state
Then:
Tour 3–5 homes or neighborhoods as if you’re advising that client
Narrate honestly — pros, cons, context, feel
Edit the clips into clear, helpful stories
Publish them:
on YouTube
on social media
in your email database
on your website as evergreen content
Result:
You’re no longer “posting content.”
You’re demonstrating how you think as an agent.
That’s what converts.
Final Thought
You don’t need to sound like me.
You don’t need perfect lighting or a single take.
You don’t even need a client today.
You just need:
a point of view
a phone
and the willingness to narrate real decisions in real time
That’s not content creation.
That’s leadership — documented.
And apparently… Loom agrees 😉
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