Video Tours Unscripted: What I Say and Why It Works

Video Tours Unscripted: What I Say and Why It Works

January 21, 20263 min read

Field Notes #4


Field Notes Series Part 2: The Loom Effect

What I Actually Say in Preview Tours (and How You Can Use This Even Without a Client)

This Isn’t a Script. It’s How I Think Out Loud in Preview Tours

In Part 1, I shared how Loom quietly decided I’m a Top 3% editor — not because I’m fancy, but because I consistently turn real-life showings into clear stories. (Read Part 1 - where I get techy with it)

Now let’s get practical.

This is not a script.
It’s a way of thinking out loud with purpose.

Below are a few real moments pulled from my preview tours, followed by how you can translate the intent behind them into your own videos — whether you have a client right now or not.


Story 1: Giving Clients Permission to Be Underwhelmed

What I actually say (paraphrased from the tour):

“I’m underwhelmed. If you love it, I want you to love it — it’s just not landing for me. I don’t know what you’d do with this layout.”

Why this works:
Most buyers are afraid to admit doubt — especially to their agent. When you say it first, you remove pressure. You normalize discernment.

How agents can use this:

  • Say the quiet part out loud

  • Name awkward layouts, odd flow, or compromises calmly

  • Let clients decide without feeling like they’re disappointing you

Reframe for your own videos:

“This one’s not bad — it’s just specific. You’d have to really love this layout for it to make sense.”


Story 2: Narrating Feel, Not Features

What I actually say:

  • “It smells good in here.”

  • “This feels cared for.”

  • “This one’s priced lower, but it’s nicer — it’s been taken care of.”

Why this works:
Photos don’t convey care, smell, sound, or energy. Video does. Clients make emotional decisions first, then justify them logically.

How agents can use this:

  • Talk about senses: smell, light, noise, warmth, dryness

  • Share instinct before specs

  • Trust your professional gut

Reframe for your own videos:

“This house just feels easier to live in.”
“You can tell someone loved this place.”


Story 3: Context Is the Show

What I actually do:
I record:

  • the drive in

  • nearby parks

  • traffic noise

  • where errands happen

  • how close it feels to real life

Why this works:
Out-of-town buyers (and even local ones) don’t just buy houses — they buy routines.

How agents can use this:

  • Narrate the approach, not just the door

  • Compare areas honestly

  • Use phrases like “city suburb” vs “country suburb”

Reframe for your own videos:

“This is close to everything, but you’ll still feel tucked away.”
“This area has activity — not chaos.”


The Translation: How You Can Do This

If You Have an Active Client

  • Use preview tours to reduce decision fatigue

  • Narrow 10 listings down to 3–4 strong contenders

  • Save time, energy, and emotional bandwidth

  • Build trust without extra meetings

If You Don’t Have a Client Yet (this part matters 👇)

Here’s the overlooked opportunity:

🎥 The “Ideal Client Tour” Strategy

Pick an ideal client avatar and pretend you’re already working for them.

For example:

  • First-time buyers relocating to your city

  • A downsizing couple

  • A growing family

  • An investor

  • A remote worker moving from out of state

Then:

  1. Tour 3–5 homes or neighborhoods as if you’re advising that client

  2. Narrate honestly — pros, cons, context, feel

  3. Edit the clips into clear, helpful stories

  4. Publish them:

    • on YouTube

    • on social media

    • in your email database

    • on your website as evergreen content

Result:
You’re no longer “posting content.”
You’re demonstrating how you think as an agent.

That’s what converts.


Final Thought

You don’t need to sound like me.
You don’t need perfect lighting or a single take.
You don’t even need a client today.

You just need:

  • a point of view

  • a phone

  • and the willingness to narrate real decisions in real time

That’s not content creation.
That’s leadership — documented.

And apparently… Loom agrees 😉


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Sylvia Dana is a real estate professional, team leader & systems strategist based in Grand Rapids, Michigan. She works at the intersection of real estate, leadership, and execution — helping clients, agents, and leaders replace chaos with clarity and systems that actually work in real life. Known for straight answers, clear systems, and a quiet resistance to broken processes.

Sylvia Dana

Sylvia Dana is a real estate professional, team leader & systems strategist based in Grand Rapids, Michigan. She works at the intersection of real estate, leadership, and execution — helping clients, agents, and leaders replace chaos with clarity and systems that actually work in real life. Known for straight answers, clear systems, and a quiet resistance to broken processes.

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